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There's a surprise... LOL! ;)

 

Well I've started writing my book for those who knew that I was writing one. For those that didn't, It has begun!!! *(As the guy from Mortal Kombat would say. :D) ANYWAYS!!!

 

I've started writing and kinda bypassed a little of the researching, I figured I could wing it and deal, but then I remembered that I'd be insane not to hit up the reach of people that I have here...

 

Here's the question: My main character is an escort *(big surprise...hehehe!) HOWEVER, she lives and works in the USA.

 

What I'm wondering from men and ladies, what are the differences there and here when booking or meeting for the first time.

 

Obviously I have to think of LE more, which is mostly why my character will have her awesome regulars... *(All of which, I've usurped from my real life, as creating new characters is way harder than stealing people I already know.)

 

Also, I don't think girls would have their faces showing as much in photos and stuff...

 

Back to the main questions at hand... If I were to write it like my main character was working in Canada, cause that's what I know, what would be different...?

 

Let me know, and it's something to discuss :D

 

Thanks for your help.

The Next Stephen King

 

SMQ xo

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Well, I've never hobbied in the U.S....so sadly I have no real valuable input......but I just HAVE to know....have I been usurped?? I SO want to be usurped! Either way I can't wait to read it :D

 

I'm sure you've already tried this but maybe a google search of escorting in the U.S? Or maybe sign up on a cerb-ish U.S board and browse through there and maybe ask some questions there?

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Also. How crucial to the story is it for her to be a U.S based escort? Could she just as easily be Canadian based?

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Probably the best text I've ever seen for aspiring writers is Steven King's 'On Writing'. His advice would be to write about what you know. In your case he would recommend keeping your escort in Canada. Being in a Canadian city would also affect your novel in many subtle ways as that would also be something you know.

 

Steven King was born and raised (and still lives) in Maine and he has set a great number of his books there.

 

Best of luck, I think its absolutely great that you are doing this. Your posts have a great deal of character and you will be a great novelist.

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Well, I've never hobbied in the U.S....so sadly I have no real valuable input......but I just HAVE to know....have I been usurped?? I SO want to be usurped! Either way I can't wait to read it :D

 

I'm sure you've already tried this but maybe a google search of escorting in the U.S? Or maybe sign up on a cerb-ish U.S board and browse through there and maybe ask some questions there?

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Also. How crucial to the story is it for her to be a U.S based escort? Could she just as easily be Canadian based?

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Having been inaugurated into the writing circles in the USofA... I know that books sell better when based in the US. My main girl will be from Canada though, but was relocated cause of... something. :)

 

And I have been googling escorts and stuff in the US... Seems to be about the same... cept they get paid crazy more there... LOL!

 

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Probably the best text I've ever seen for aspiring writers is Steven King's 'On Writing'. His advice would be to write about what you know. In your case he would recommend keeping your escort in Canada. Being in a Canadian city would also affect your novel in many subtle ways as that would also be something you know.

 

Steven King was born and raised (and still lives) in Maine and he has set a great number of his books there.

 

Best of luck, I think its absolutely great that you are doing this. Your posts have a great deal of character and you will be a great novelist.

 

The "On Writing" book is right in front of me at the moment. :D

 

I have to write it in the States, cause it sells better that way. It's also a learning experience for me. The whole "Escorting" biz will be an offside, as the story focuses more on the main character and her interactions with what's happening around her.

 

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There is more screening in the USA. Clients are used to giving out real names and work information. When Americans come to Montreal most offer it up without me even asking.

 

They also use verification services where the info goes into a database of sorts but is encrypted and then providers can search via a number to see if they have been white listed. No real names shared.

 

http://www.roomservice2000.com/

 

http://www.preferred411.com/

 

http://www.date-check.com/

 

I would LOVE if more Canadians used services like this. Make screening and verifying a breeze for both client and lady alike.

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I just want to clarify that while escorting is a part of this novel, and important to the main character, this is a horror novel.

 

The escorting just allows me to write in unnecessary sex scenes.. Hehehe :P

 

Thanks for all the info so far!!!

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There is much more suspicion and exposure for clients in the US. If you are trying to see someone who has some preputation then you can expect to have to provide a reference (local), a method of communication (email or valid phone number) and at some point a credit card. This makes arrangements with an unknown provider almost impossible if you have any privacy issues at all. This means that you have to either expose yourself to the threat, try to meet up with someone directly (bar/street) or forget about meeting someone until you have screened her as well. There are pockets that are similar to the practice in Canada but both co-exist in the US more than in Canada.

 

The whole industry, though more lucrative, has more of an underworld feel to it. I guess the lure for SPs would be the money. Thank goodness for Canada where there is more trust involved.

 

Hope that the writing progresses well.

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Miss Sara,

I think it also depends where the story takes place. Life is very different south of the Mason-Dixon and that could come into play. Verification is key but the entire industry has a different business model down South. I would be more than happy to make you dinner and we can spend an evening discussing it...

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The escorting just allows me to write in unnecessary sex scenes.. Hehehe :P

 

!

 

Do I die *again* in that one?:P

 

But this is one of the reason why I love you so much. :D

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Nevada is an interesting US location. The Ranches are unlike anything in Canada or elsewhere in the US. They are close to Reno and Las Vegas. I used one once some time ago and when you are buzzed through the gate, you enter the building and are met by half a dozen ladies lined up for your selection, then off you go. I didn't hang out in the bar as I was the only one there and felt somewhat out of place.

 

In another southern state I simply used a review type site. Not being a member the review text was limited, but I found a great lady who charged the same as a high end Ottawa provider and who quoted her donation as Roses rather than dollars. She arrived at the hotel and the rest is as you would expect and I had hoped.:icon_smile:

 

A thought for you re location, I am a Sci Fi fan and I enjoy stories like yours where the location is unknown. You could use your Canadian experience in an unnamed country and you would have the flexibility to create any environment/situation that your imagination can vision. If you use enough to make the reader think it might be located in some unknown corner of the US that can help.

 

I look forward to your publish date.

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As I understand it from first hand sources, the laws are much different. I would start by researching that first to help develop your characters' parameters and believable scenarios, even if it is a horror story.

 

Just my 2.5 cents... :)

 

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...The Ranches are unlike anything in Canada or elsewhere in the US....

 

THATS IT! Sara can do a horror story about the Chicken Ranch!

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My $0.02, I believe that there are a lot more sting operations in the US. I would not be comfortable SP'ing in the US. On one of my trips to Vegas I got a cab from the airport to hotel. Cabbie asks what hotel and then asked if I wanted a girl to cum up to my room. No hesitation at all, did not know me from Adam. But I must say she was cute......no, no I did not partake.

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Miss Sara,

I think it also depends where the story takes place. Life is very different south of the Mason-Dixon and that could come into play. Verification is key but the entire industry has a different business model down South. I would be more than happy to make you dinner and we can spend an evening discussing it...

cat

 

I would love that hun... just the dinner in itself. :) Ill be in touch, I miss you! (And I totally forgot that you once worked there... LOL!)

 

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I really just need enough for a basic introduction to escorting...

 

And where it is doesn't really matter LOL! I'm wiping out humanity as we know it anyways.

 

(With a sense of humour on the side)

 

...and that's how that cookie crumbles. :)

 

NOW BACK TO TOTAL WORLD DESTRUCTION!!!! MUAHAHAHHAHA!

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I just want to clarify that while escorting is a part of this novel, and important to the main character, this is a horror novel.

 

The escorting just allows me to write in unnecessary sex scenes.. Hehehe :P

 

Thanks for all the info so far!!!

 

Sounds awesome! Can't wait for the movie version! :p. You know....if you ever need someone to adapt it for you, well I used to do some amateur screenwriting......I could perhaps be.....persuaded....to pick it up again! ;)

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I,ve used ero,s guide when i was in miami last year then went to the independants section, i found it was very very similar to ec canada and the prices were very similar as well.

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I think the threat of stings is very real, and that the screening is very important. If escorting is only going to be a background to the story, you may not need to know too much more than that without going into specific details of the biz down there. I think that face pics are actually more common than here, for validity and so clients arriving (or having sp arrive) can be more sure it won't be an LE sting. I think that there is a perception that rates are crazy high, but there is also just as much chance someone is working at 100/hr as they are at 500/hr, or more, so it isn't really a for sure thing.

 

You may want your character to be higher end tho, and independent, so she can charge and be located wherever you like. She is not going to provide menus of services, and she will have that standard rates are for time clause, of course. She will hang up or ignore emails and calls from anyone wanting her to get specific about them, fwiw.

 

I haven't heard of any clients being required to show CCs, but ID yes, like driver license. Keeping in mind that LE has no problem providing that either. She could tho use references, date check services, and you can eliminate some of the need to discuss the screening in detail.

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Thanks for all the info :) I'm 2500 words in already. HOORAY!

 

I think I know where I'm heading now.

 

Thanks again.

MUAH!

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I have to write it in the States, cause it sells better that way.

 

Someone should of told that to J.K. Rowling... ;)

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Great book if available at the library is "The Price" by Natalie MacLennan. Montreal girl who went to the states and became rather famous in NY circles. Really difficult to get a copy to buy now.... but the main branch has it on its shelves from time to time.

 

Oh and there needs to be a zombie dog. Just saying.

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Great book if available at the library is "The Price" by Natalie MacLennan. Montreal girl who went to the states and became rather famous in NY circles. Really difficult to get a copy to buy now.... but the main branch has it on its shelves from time to time.

 

Oh and there needs to be a zombie dog. Just saying.

 

really? I bought the French version about a year ago and the English version at Chapters on Rideau in October and they had about 3 copies? I would lent it to you Sara, but one of my friend have it down in TO...and at the rythm that she read...won't have it back before at least another month -_-'

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I don't want a book on escorting...

 

I'm an escort and a writer, so I can totally write one on my own. (...and better than her).

 

I'm not ever writing a book about escorting... It's a horror novel.

 

I don't want to read the book called The Price, unless someone dies in it. LMAO!

 

Written by another escort is nice...

 

My book will be way better.

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