jerican 657 Report post Posted December 3, 2009 SaraMQ has inspired me too. I am very much about connection, chemistry, and passion in this hobby; reading the amazing posts the women have been writing inspired me to jot something down. This is how I feel when I repeat with someone I really connect with. Be kind to this artistic soul people! ;-) You I remember you, the Id and emotion I remember the touch, the feel, the look I remember your skin, your eyes, your lips I call, you answer and a date is set I call, we talk and remember our time I call, everything is in motion, time passes We meet, our time is fleeting We meet, our bodies warm, our lips touch We meet, the passion is like fire, our time seems endless A kiss is shared; I hold you and talk softly A kiss is shared; my hand traces your body A kiss is shared; I leave you, our moment has ended Thank you my lover, my paramour Thank you my confidant, my release Thank you for sharing your time with me. 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
S**y B***e (Retired) 123 Report post Posted December 3, 2009 Very well said and just beautiful :) Love it!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest W***ledi*Time Report post Posted December 3, 2009 Thank you for sharing this, J! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Loki318 1631 Report post Posted December 3, 2009 (edited) This isnt exactly about an SP perhaps I can call it the one that got away: the names have been changed to protect the guilty :) For Melany When I see you, passing by A twinkle comes into my eye. If you should perchance to wave A pleasant joy, I feel to save. To catch your flashing eyes in mine Will sustain me for a time. A friendly word from you, "Hello" Pleases me more than you can Know. A chance for real conversation, So far t'is the ultimate sensatian. But in my realm of Fantasy, You and I will Lovers Be! (three months later) Often I sit and close my eyes Just to see yours looking back Those big brown eyes! Full of smoke and mystery What do they hide, Laughter at my silly advance? What do they feel, Mirth for a silly old fool? And if Not, Then What of me? Do I dare say aloud The things that I pen? Do I dare to make a move Outside of Fantasy? One small step into reality Would change my history! (one month later ) How do I tell you the depth of my feeling How do I tell you I Care! How do I tell you The length of my longing How do I tell you I Care! We meet as two people and we speak Never talking 'bout Feelings & Longings Don't Dare ! If I Were to tell you The depth of my feelings The length of my longing Would you care? Loki318 Edited December 3, 2009 by Loki318 high lights 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jerican 657 Report post Posted December 3, 2009 Amazing Loki!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Loki318 1631 Report post Posted December 3, 2009 Mod or Mod in charge :) Is there a limit to the length of a message or post? I have some musings that are not in poetry form and are somewhat longer short stories actually, and how explicit can we get here ?? Loki318 ...... dirty old man :) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest f***2f*** Report post Posted December 3, 2009 Are you spying on me? This sums it up nicely and poetically...well done. SaraMQ has inspired me too. I am very much about connection, chemistry, and passion in this hobby; reading the amazing posts the women have been writing inspired me to jot something down. This is how I feel when I repeat with someone I really connect with. Be kind to this artistic soul people! ;-) You I remember you, the Id and emotion I remember the touch, the feel, the look I remember your skin, your eyes, your lips I call, you answer and a date is set I call, we talk and remember our time I call, everything is in motion, time passes We meet, our time is fleeting We meet, our bodies warm, our lips touch We meet, the passion is like fire, our time seems endless A kiss is shared; I hold you and talk softly A kiss is shared; my hand traces your body A kiss is shared; I leave you, our moment has ended Thank you my lover, my paramour Thank you my confidant, my release Thank you for sharing your time with me. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cato 160314 Report post Posted December 3, 2009 A poem I wrote recently for one of my very favs: An Ode Long the wait and deep the wanting. A word from her would set him free. Thoughts of youthful blonde perfection Taking wing in fantasy. The day, it dawns. She draws upon him Linking in erotic stance. Dancer’s body poised above him Rousing him as from a trance. Deep the want and long the waiting. The world rends them apart again. Promises of pleasures pending Work to ease the parting pain. Raptures he has pledged to bring her Locked in mutual loving bliss. Till we meet again remember What it means to want, and miss. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VedaSloan 119179 Report post Posted December 4, 2009 A poem I wrote recently for one of my very favs: An Ode Long the wait and deep the wanting. A word from her would set him free. Thoughts of youthful blonde perfection Taking wing in fantasy. The day, it dawns. She draws upon him Linking in erotic stance. Dancer?s body poised above him Rousing him as from a trance. Deep the want and long the waiting. The world rends them apart again. Promises of pleasures pending Work to ease the parting pain. Raptures he has pledged to bring her Locked in mutual loving bliss. Till we meet again remember What it means to want, and miss. Cato, this really is lovely. I enjoyed the reversal of the first lines of the first two stanzas. Also some very nice alliteration! Lately I'm quite fond of rhyming vowel sounds. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cato 160314 Report post Posted December 4, 2009 Thank you, Erin. I value your opinion. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest S**a*Q Report post Posted December 4, 2009 Good question :) I'm a fan of erotica and have some short stories i wrote as well... As for the length, maybe we can post them in chapters? I'll await the answer! Mod or Mod in charge :) Is there a limit to the length of a message or post? I have some musings that are not in poetry form and are somewhat longer short stories actually, and how explicit can we get here ?? Loki318 ...... dirty old man :) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NotchJohnson 214123 Report post Posted December 4, 2009 For all of the ladies that changed their names for privacy reasons. She wears it like a mask Each time she comes to me, A shroud to cloud my eyes, A veil I cannot see. But her mask is just a ruse, An aspect of her game. It hides the girl behind The fiction of her name. The name is but a symbol, Of the role she plays for me, A promise unfulfilled, A hope of what could be. Removing all between us, Clothed only in her name. Her touch is my illusion, Setting heart and loin aflame. A mirage within a dream, A ghost of fragile youth, She is fantasy and fire And beauty born of truth. Her name is but a name, A symbol, just a mask, Concealing what I see, Revealing what I ask. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jerican 657 Report post Posted December 4, 2009 I would think the best approach is to get a free hosting page (or a blog)and post the stories there. You could but the first 'page' here with a link to the full story. That way the thread doesn't get unwieldy and people could enjoy the stories. Good question :) I'm a fan of erotica and have some short stories i wrote as well... As for the length, maybe we can post them in chapters? I'll await the answer! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VedaSloan 119179 Report post Posted December 5, 2009 For all of the ladies that changed their names for privacy reasons. She wears it like a mask Each time she comes to me' date=' A shroud to cloud my eyes, A veil I cannot see. But her mask is just a ruse, An aspect of her game. It hides the girl behind The fiction of her name. The name is but a symbol, Of the role she plays for me, A promise unfulfilled, A hope of what could be. Removing all between us, Clothed only in her name. Her touch is my illusion, Setting heart and loin aflame. A mirage within a dream, A ghost of fragile youth, She is fantasy and fire And beauty born of truth. Her name is but a name, A symbol, just a mask, Concealing what I see, Revealing what I ask.[/quote'] Really enjoyed that T'storm! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emma Alexandra 123367 Report post Posted December 8, 2009 wow i'm impressed by your Pure potery...bravo...i love poems kisses, Emma A Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
